Improve Your Pitch’s Chance of Survival

Keep your PR pitches from winding up in my trash can

We’re all in a rush. Sometimes, this translates into our attempts at human communication. At the same time, we’re all overwhelmed and have way too many things vying for our attention. This is the perfect storm of ways not to be seen. So, how can you improve your PR pitch’s chance of survival and how do you keep it out of people’s trash cans?

The RIGHT Influencers

I’m lucky enough to have a large audience. This somehow translates to most PR people as, “I should pitch him because he’s an influencer.” However, we’re not all the same. I’m not a mommy blogger. I’m not a tech blogger. I’m not a “personal” blogger.

You need the right influencer. Not sure how to tell who’s who? Read their last 10 posts. Browse the topic titles. If you don’t see your press release fitting in, don’t drop them a line. Swing by Alltop and find someone more suited to your needs.

Be Human and Realize The Balance

The other thing I get, often, is this sense that the PR professional thinks that sending me content is their favor to me. Maybe that’s how it is at most blogs. I really don’t know. But I have enough topics to last me 10 years without getting a press release.

Instead, see if there’s a way that you can find the blogger’s typical angle and craft your first paragraph or so to match it. I write about human business and how things can work or not work for sustainable, relationship-minded business. I don’t write about software unless it’s in the context of human business or marketing. I really don’t care about most software releases. That’s what techcrunch and gigaom and readwriteweb and mashable and the others cover. I write about people.

So find the storyline for the place you’re writing and pitch it DIRECTLY to them, instead of sending off these robot pitches where you copy/paste, and replace the name. There’s a time when you have to send mass emails, but I’ll tell you that it might not be in the pitch department, at least not if you really want to see a particular story placed.

Brevity Rules

There are two trains of thought: the two-mail system or the one-big-giant-mail system. I’d rather the third: the one really brief all-in-one mail. I recently pitched about 80 people asking them if they wanted to reserve professional speaking dates with me. In every case, the email was under 200 words, and the effort was spent to make sure they knew that I meant them specifically and not a puppy-mill approach. I had an assistant send out and manage the conversation, but I was on top of each contact.

To me, that’s a reasonable way to pitch. Short, brief, with links to support research, and with a really simple call-to-action.

Don’t Forget that We’re Lazy

I’m generalizing here, but bloggers aren’t always mainstream press and it’s not always our job to blog. Instead, we’re looking for ways to build and grow a community, and we’re looking for information (sometimes) that’s useful to them. If you make it hard for the blogger to do what you want done, then they might not be as likely to do it. You don’t always have to spoon feed it, but there’s perhaps a middle ground between making the blogger do all the heavy lifting and facilitating an interaction with the blogger and his or her community.

In this instance, I’m thinking of things like promotions and giveaways. I’ve done some that were really easy. I’ve done others that it was really difficult to complete all the things required. Hint: make it easy.

The Old Blogger Moaning Post

PR professionals see posts like this as the old blogger moaning post. It’s stock. It’s in there with “_____ is dead.” I’m approaching this differently. I’d rather find ways to help your pitch succeed. I’ve given you a few above. Here are a few others:

  • If we know you from conversations on Twitter and elsewhere (like comments on our blog), we’re more likely to open the email in the first place.
  • If you help us with something simple, like the occasional retweet, we might notice you, too (not as big for me, but others like that stuff).
  • If you have a presence of your own, a blog, a personality, something that we can latch onto, we’re more likely to interact with you. You’re the media, too.
  • Liz Strauss said it best: little bloggers grow up. If you want the real influencers, speak to more John Haydon types and fewer Guy Kawasakis. (No sleight, Guy.)
  • If you sent the occasional “checking in” email without asking for something, we’re less likely to wince when you send us the pitch.
  • The term “for immediate release” is awesome for mainstream press. For me, I have a filter that deletes these on arrival. It’s too impersonal. (Fight me on this, if you want.)

And Don’t Bash PR People in the Comments

PR isn’t bad. Bad PR is bad. You’re probably doing it right. Unless you’re doing it wrong.

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  • http://www.kevkaye.com Kev Kaye

    It is interesting to hear this from a pitchee. It seems all of this is still very new and the “how” is still being ironed out. A large part of PR now is to completely understand who you’re pitching. If you show a sincere understanding of what they’re about, you’re much more likely to get what you want.

  • Anonymous

    I love Liz Strauss’s quote “little bloggers grow up. If you want the real influencers, speak to more John Haydon types and fewer Guy Kawasakis. (No sleight, Guy.)”. I see this happen all the time…. People (not just PR People) elephant hunt. They want that one big fish to blog about them or bless their product or become their friend. Thus they get nothing. But if they focused on people who are scrappy and growing their brand, they can establish relationships — and when that “little” blogger grows up, they are always their friend.

    Same thing goes when attending a big conference (like SXSW), don’t stalk the celebrities, but instead focus on regular folks and you will get more out of your interpersonal give and take.

    Besides, I find the less known bloggers to be more interesting much of the time (present company excluded).

    thom

  • Kelly

    Thank you for sharing this- not just because you’re right on but because you also offer advice about how to pitch better.

    As someone who is on both sides of the pitch I have a ton of respect for people who do it right. I try really hard to be one of those people.

    I wish more people would listen to Liz’s advice.

  • Dave Wellman

    I am a “really new” blogger. I’m am still in the “sit back and keep your mouth shut stage” of things, but this is great advice for when I grow up. Thanks for the information. It makes real sense to me and will be the way I treat folks when the time comes for me to do some PR.

    • http://www.chrisljordan.com Chris Jordan

      Dave, I would totally just skip that stage you just mentioned. ;)

  • Anonymous

    Very true, Chris, of course. I like your advice for PR people, but as a blogger, it is helpful to hear what might be challenging for PR folks. Sometimes, when I receive the robotic pitches, I tend to forget the “pitcher” is human, too, and get kind of a bad attitude.

  • http://www.facebook.com/maryeulrich Mary E. Ulrich

    Seems like we are all PR people. Love your comment: “PR isn’t bad. Bad PR is bad” Sounds like a Speech title, T-shirt or Button slogan for one of those conferences you are pitching.

  • http://www.facebook.com/maryeulrich Mary E. Ulrich

    Seems like we are all PR people. Love your comment: “PR isn’t bad. Bad PR is bad” Sounds like a Speech title, T-shirt or Button slogan for one of those conferences you are pitching.

  • http://johnhaydon.com John Haydon

    Thanks for crashing my blog again, Chris… ;-)

  • Anonymous

    PR people are storytellers. You are a storyteller. The perfect pitch is from the PR person who knows their story intuitively and recognizes that the audience they are trying to reach is the same audience you are already reaching. When the PR person understands their job is to help you better serve your audience, and that their story (product, service, idea, company) is a match or enhancement to your efforts, it’s a beautiful thing. Your fan, rv

  • http://www.catheycommunications.com/blog Robert.R.Cathey

    Good stuff.

    Your post is the most recent in a long-running and steady stream of pleadings for PR people to do their jobs professionally: do the research, target the pitch, be brief, respect deadlines, provide access, be responsive.

    It’s probably true that most PR professionals do the hard work and provide real value. It’s just painful to watch the rest get all the attention.

  • Beth Monaghan

    Thanks for the great post. Very good advice for everyone in the PR industry.

  • http://spreemancommunications.com Amy Spreeman

    I really dislike pitching, and I pretty much know why. Fear.
    In my profession (freelance writing for businesses), I put a lot of myself into my work. So a rejection of a pitch feels like a personal rejection. Yeah, it’s an irrational and childish fear and I know it’s not true, but who doesn’t revert to his or her inner child’s insecurities when those buttons are pushed?

    Good timing on this article, as I prepare to spend my morning doing my least favorite thing. (It’s not about me; it’s not about me…)

    • http://chrisbrogan.com Chris Brogan

      Oh, I’m all about pitching, myself. I just do my best to do it with a human at the end of the rope. : )

      • http://spreemancommunications.com Amy Spreeman

        I used to be that human. Two media relations jobs in my past (and let me tell you I liked having that kind of power over reporters and PR people!) I was tough on people I didn’t know. Sometimes just spelling and grammar errors made the difference in whether that person got the interview he or she wanted. But I will say that I did like being treated like a human being instead of a means. Building relationships is key.

      • http://spreemancommunications.com Amy Spreeman

        I used to be that human. Two media relations jobs in my past (and let me tell you I liked having that kind of power over reporters and PR people!) I was tough on people I didn’t know. Sometimes just spelling and grammar errors made the difference in whether that person got the interview he or she wanted. But I will say that I did like being treated like a human being instead of a means. Building relationships is key.

      • http://spreemancommunications.com Amy Spreeman

        I used to be that human. Two media relations jobs in my past (and let me tell you I liked having that kind of power over reporters and PR people!) I was tough on people I didn’t know. Sometimes just spelling and grammar errors made the difference in whether that person got the interview he or she wanted. But I will say that I did like being treated like a human being instead of a means. Building relationships is key.

      • http://spreemancommunications.com Amy Spreeman

        I used to be that human. Two media relations jobs in my past (and let me tell you I liked having that kind of power over reporters and PR people!) I was tough on people I didn’t know. Sometimes just spelling and grammar errors made the difference in whether that person got the interview he or she wanted. But I will say that I did like being treated like a human being instead of a means. Building relationships is key.

      • http://spreemancommunications.com Amy Spreeman

        I used to be that human. Two media relations jobs in my past (and let me tell you I liked having that kind of power over reporters and PR people!) I was tough on people I didn’t know. Sometimes just spelling and grammar errors made the difference in whether that person got the interview he or she wanted. But I will say that I did like being treated like a human being instead of a means. Building relationships is key.

    • http://chrisbrogan.com Chris Brogan

      Oh, I’m all about pitching, myself. I just do my best to do it with a human at the end of the rope. : )

  • http://nancimurdock.com Nanci Murdock

    I don’t know what to say. I’m in shock.

    You’re not a Mommy Blogger? What the heck have I been doing hanging out here for so long!

    (wink)

  • http://ajleon.me/the-opportunity-cost-of-not-taking-yourself-seriously ajleon

    This is great, not just for “PR professionals”, for anyone that works with PR at all, which is all of us. Thanks for including a little jab at the “PR is dead” people, that’s always a good laugh. :)

  • http://reallifemadman.wordpress.com Marjorie Clayman

    Well, I personally sent you news releases because I thought you were a typist – I thought you were going to fax all of those back to me, formatted. I was actually going to follow up with you and say that I’m getting pretty tight on deadlines here.

    I had no idea you had this other stuff going on. I apologize for the misunderstanding. Please discard everything I sent.

  • http://blog.esimplestudios.com Gabriele Maidecchi

    I actually think a good PR won’t feel bad about this post but will see it as an opportunity to learn something new (as I did, even if I am not a PR).

  • http://www.paulyokota.com Paul Yokota

    “For immediate release” is drilled into PR practitioner’s heads as a professional standard. It comes as naturally as ending a message with “sincerely” or “best regards,” especially for those who have been in the industry for a more than a decade or so. But it belongs on a press release, not a pitch letter (or email). A pitch letter needs to be personalized to let the writer or editor know exactly how what your pitching fits in with what they write about and what their audience wants to read.

  • Anonymous

    Now I have to wonder how many additional ‘check in’ emails you received today, because of that one statement you made above….

  • Anonymous

    Now I have to wonder how many additional ‘check in’ emails you received today, because of that one statement you made above….

  • http://twitter.com/brianjohnriggs Brian John Riggs

    The two words I enjoy most within this post are “human business.” The other day I was engaged in a conversation where we discussed the concept of “thought economy” which got me thinking about the human side to everything we do. Great post.

  • http://twitter.com/brianjohnriggs Brian John Riggs

    The two words I enjoy most within this post are “human business.” The other day I was engaged in a conversation where we discussed the concept of “thought economy” which got me thinking about the human side to everything we do. Great post.

  • http://twitter.com/markrotoole Mark O’Toole

    Damn, I miss the old days of blast e-mails and the resulting coverage. All this research and one-to-one stuff is a drag!

  • http://www.hanifinloyalty.com/ billhanifin

    For Immediate Release…don’t know if I would penalize for using an industry standard lead in on the press release itself, but I also know that I would not use that term in an email subject line.

    Question is, what do you think is engaging, but not too impersonal? Is using your (the blogger’s name in the subject line ok “Chris, thought you should see this” or is that cheesy?

    Maybe one could try this: “We’ve launched a product that is sorely needed in the Loyalty Marketing business – please let us know what you think”….. can’t get any more candid than that!

    Let me know your opinion if you can….

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  • http://www.ianbrodie.com ianbrodie

    The best form of PR is the Pedantic Reply I feel…so here’s mine…

    Shouln’t it be “no slight Guy” not “no sleight”. A slight is an insult. A sleight is clever deception as in sleight of hand.

    Ian

  • Amy

    Chris! I find your reference in ‘don’t forget that we’re lazy’ to mainstream press amusing. As a member of the mainstream press, in addition to being a blogger, trust me when I say that the mainstream press is NOT the exception to being lazy. Not only don’t most reporters generate their own stories, most don’t even open press releases unless they come straight from the assignment editor (and then only reluctantly). I’m speaking at BlogWorld about “How to Get Your Blog or Business Covered by the Media”…(opposite the Darren Rowse SUPER panel – OUCH!!!) and I will be touching on some of these same points. Mainstream media types and bloggers have plenty in common — and that’s good news for bloggers who really want to get noticed, if they just know how to go about it.

    Amy Parmenter

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  • http://twitter.com/jennewilson Jennifer Wilson

    I think we sometimes forget about your “additional tips” when going through the motions of clicking “send” on a press release. Thanks for the reminder!

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  • http://www.DieselTees.com Greg

    Thanks for the tips Chris, you have been a great influence on my marketing

  • http://www.DieselTees.com Greg

    Thanks for the tips Chris, you have been a great influence on my marketing

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