Make Better Presentations – The Anatomy of a Good Speech

soccer player You deserve some great tools, so I’d like to share what I’ve been working on. You might have an upcoming presentation, or you might be looking to speak more at events. ( here’s how to start speaking at events) I have a few ideas for you. I want to share with you my current thinking on presentations, such that I hope you feel equipped to do more with your own work. Fair?

Presentations are a way to move information from my head into your actions. If I do it right, I give my ideas “handles,” so that you can run with what I’ve started and make it your own. If you do it right, then your presentations will also help others. I’ve been thinking about the anatomy of presentations, and what we can do to improve how we’re doing what we do.

Start with WIIFM

I have talked about this before, but the first and most important thing to talk about first is explaining what’s in it for me, the listener, the audience. “What’s in it for me?” Answer that early. You might start by saying, “You’ve got a lot of work on your plate. I’ve got seven ideas for how to make that go smoothly for you.”

See what that does? It starts the story from the reader’s perspective. And if you think of your audience as readers in a story, or viewers of a movie, or an audience at a play, you’re in the right mindset.

What Is the Goal of a Presentation?

Perhaps the simplest goal is that a presentation is built to convey ideas. But to me, that’s not going far enough. If I’m going to bother to educate through a presentation, my goal is to influence you to take action and/or change behavior. It’s not good enough that you walk away as if you feel you know something more. I want you to want to do something more.

So, if you think of it that way, a presentation is a sale.

If we’re going to sell, we have to be a bit more serious about it. With that in mind, I’ve collected some ideas. Maybe they’ll spark some ideas of your own, and you can add them to the conversation.

Use a Framework of Some Kind

I absolutely loathe the “I’m going to tell you this; I am telling you this; I told you this” method of presentations. We don’t watch movies that way. Only some books have a table of contents up front (fiction doesn’t do that often). It’s just not fun seeing the “Title, Agenda, About Me” method. We’re too used to it.

Instead, how about a framework like this (for example)?

  • Ask your audience a question that frames the speech.
  • Tell your audience how you’ll try and answer that question.
  • Start with a personal or investigatory story.
  • Drill down into the details of how the story applies to your presentation.
  • Offer some takeaways or next-actions for this.
  • Tell another personal or informational story.
  • Repeat the drill down points, the takeaways, etc.
  • Thread questions in earlier than the end.
  • Finish with a solid set of steps people can use to take action based on your presentation.

This is one storytelling frame. You can do all kinds of other variations on the theme. For instance, what if you did something like this:

  • Start with a question about a famous figure.
  • Explain that your audience is there to help you figure out if that figure embodies the subject matter you’re covering.
  • Ask them to consider the figure at every step in the presentation.
  • And present…

In whichever framework you choose, make sure that you check in, frequently with your audience. Be sure they’re moving along with your presentation. If you see eyes glazing, react (either by livening up your speaking tone, or by noting where people start to glaze and fixing it in a subsequent effort). If you see enthusiasm, look at that person for inspiration. But always check in. Often.

Inspiration for Great Speeches

It’s easier to learn if you pull from interesting sources for inspiration.

First off, some number of you thought my first link would be to TED or PopTech. Though you can hear some amazing speeches there, I thought we’d slip off the beaten path of presentations and look for our inspiration elsewhere.

  • Cirque Du Soleil – If you’re going to design presentations, what would happen if you thought of them like a performance? I’ve seen two Cirque du Soleil shows in the last 12 months, and I think you could do worse than to think like a performance troupe who breaks the boundaries of showmanship with each event.
  • Alec Baldwin – The “Always Be Closing” Speech – The important part of this speech is the passion, the timing, the directness. Yes, there’s cursing, but there’s also big heaps of passion. Watch and learn.
  • David Lee Roth – In his time, David was quite the showman. Say what you will about his music, he knew what the audience wanted and he gave it to them. A good showman (showperson?) knows how to give the audience his or her best.
  • Watch Eve Ensler doing her vagina thing for TED (yep, I blew it and had to point you to TED). Did you see how she started? She pulled you in right away. It’s an uncomfortable topic (to some), and you can watch her move people back and forth from emotions. Do you even think about emotions when you think about presentations? Notice also how she does this as a conversation, and yet, it’s very practiced.
  • Look at comic book covers. Graphic design and interesting layout for your presentations sure doesn’t come canned inside the application. Look for it. Think on ways to deliver different visual experiences, and think about how to make them more interesting than linear text and clip art.
    little pirate ship
  • What About the Physical World? – I’ve been increasingly more interested with thinking about how the physical world can tie into the world in our minds. If you do something physical in the room, it makes a buzz.

The point is this: don’t look at other slide decks to be inspired. Look at other sources that go far afield of the beaten path and bring some synthesis of those ideas and your goals together on the table for you to work with. Think like a creator and a storyteller, and use tools way outside one specific constraint to get where you need to go.

Shop Your Work

You can practice and test and work out your presentations, you know. Author and speaker David Meerman Scott works from the perspective of perfecting his presentations, mapping them out to great detail, and then tweaking only small pieces while leaving the most of his work intact.

I think both Mitch Joel and Seth Godin do the same: take their presentations into a fairly solid form, and then just modify certain parts to match certain audiences. It makes sense. Working from a solid place, a home base, a pre-conceived set of ideas in a certain flow makes sense to lots of folks.

But don’t be afraid to try things.

How I’ve Been Doing It

Notes from a PresentationThe way I’ve been doing my presentations over the last several weeks has been very experimental. I’ve been writing some ideas into a small notebook and presenting from that notebook. The thing is, I’ve been doing it without a linear storyline.

I’ve worked strictly in the moment, like an improv actor or an artist or a cook. I take all the raw pieces of my conversations and work them into pieces of information on the fly and in real time.

I enjoy it. My audience doesn’t seem to like it as much. They come away appreciative of my passion but no more ready to take action. And that matters, so after some feedback, I’m working on my own presentations to reel them back into something that matches what’s above.

It’s important that you realize that your presentation is not just your creative work, but also your audience’s time and attention. If you don’t give your work some level of care and if you don’t constantly strive to communicate better with your audience, then why will people choose to learn from you over another source? Always pay attention to how your audience receives your work. Always seek feedback. Always strive to improve even more.

What Else Can I Tell You?

I know what I know. What do you want to now? How may I help you understand more? What will help this all make sense? What more can I add or clarify?

Thank you, as always, for your time and attention. It’s my goal that you feel like you receive value from spending time with me, and it’s my aim to be helpful. Thanks.

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  • http://donotreadthisblogunless.blogspot.com/ Nicholas Chase

    Chris,

    This post nails the whole issue with presentations. I became rather agitated and downright offended, while at Sony Systems Engineering, to attend engineering design review meetings for new broadcast television systems design customers, and the presenter would place his PowerPoint slide-show on the projector screen, and the count was: Slide # 1 of 150 slides!

    A collective groan would emanate from my peer engineers as well as the customers! It would take this two hour, winding tour of the proposed system design, with way too much detail, and served to confuse the customer rather than engage and motivate the customer to respond.

    It was truly mind-numbing behaviour.

    Your approach is much more memorable, as I cannot recall any memorable ones from Sony in the five years I worked there, excepting my presentation to the elite management that contained fifteen (15!) slides, and covered only the essential information required. It took ten minutes, and I saved more time for questions than my presentation’s duration.

    If only companies and presenters followed your lead, this method of sharing information would be more efficient, timely and not frustrate your customer.

    Respectfully,

    Nicholas Chase
    http://www.twitter.com/nachase

  • http://donotreadthisblogunless.blogspot.com/ Nicholas Chase

    Chris,

    This post nails the whole issue with presentations. I became rather agitated and downright offended, while at Sony Systems Engineering, to attend engineering design review meetings for new broadcast television systems design customers, and the presenter would place his PowerPoint slide-show on the projector screen, and the count was: Slide # 1 of 150 slides!

    A collective groan would emanate from my peer engineers as well as the customers! It would take this two hour, winding tour of the proposed system design, with way too much detail, and served to confuse the customer rather than engage and motivate the customer to respond.

    It was truly mind-numbing behaviour.

    Your approach is much more memorable, as I cannot recall any memorable ones from Sony in the five years I worked there, excepting my presentation to the elite management that contained fifteen (15!) slides, and covered only the essential information required. It took ten minutes, and I saved more time for questions than my presentation’s duration.

    If only companies and presenters followed your lead, this method of sharing information would be more efficient, timely and not frustrate your customer.

    Respectfully,

    Nicholas Chase
    http://www.twitter.com/nachase

  • http://donotreadthisblogunless.blogspot.com/ Nicholas Chase

    Chris,

    This post nails the whole issue with presentations. I became rather agitated and downright offended, while at Sony Systems Engineering, to attend engineering design review meetings for new broadcast television systems design customers, and the presenter would place his PowerPoint slide-show on the projector screen, and the count was: Slide # 1 of 150 slides!

    A collective groan would emanate from my peer engineers as well as the customers! It would take this two hour, winding tour of the proposed system design, with way too much detail, and served to confuse the customer rather than engage and motivate the customer to respond.

    It was truly mind-numbing behaviour.

    Your approach is much more memorable, as I cannot recall any memorable ones from Sony in the five years I worked there, excepting my presentation to the elite management that contained fifteen (15!) slides, and covered only the essential information required. It took ten minutes, and I saved more time for questions than my presentation’s duration.

    If only companies and presenters followed your lead, this method of sharing information would be more efficient, timely and not frustrate your customer.

    Respectfully,

    Nicholas Chase
    http://www.twitter.com/nachase

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  • http://drewskwarcan.com/ Drew Skwarcan

    Good thoughts here, Chris. As a undergrad in Industrial Engineering, I am often shocked at how poorly my peers give presentations. People underestimate the importance of getting your thoughts clearly to an audience (or a board, etc).

  • http://drewskwarcan.com/ Drew Skwarcan

    Good thoughts here, Chris. As a undergrad in Industrial Engineering, I am often shocked at how poorly my peers give presentations. People underestimate the importance of getting your thoughts clearly to an audience (or a board, etc).

  • http://drewskwarcan.com/ Drew Skwarcan

    Good thoughts here, Chris. As a undergrad in Industrial Engineering, I am often shocked at how poorly my peers give presentations. People underestimate the importance of getting your thoughts clearly to an audience (or a board, etc).

  • http://www.stevecurtin.com steve curtin

    Chris,
    Great points. You obviously speak from experience. Appreciate your humility as well (i.e., my audience doesn’t seem to like it as much). Been there.
    I would add that there’s an attention curve when you have the greatest % of your audience’s attention: at the beginning and end. If a presentation is going to be judged as effective, it will be due in large part to a strong opening and closing.
    Best,
    Steve

  • http://www.stevecurtin.com steve curtin

    Chris,
    Great points. You obviously speak from experience. Appreciate your humility as well (i.e., my audience doesn’t seem to like it as much). Been there.
    I would add that there’s an attention curve when you have the greatest % of your audience’s attention: at the beginning and end. If a presentation is going to be judged as effective, it will be due in large part to a strong opening and closing.
    Best,
    Steve

  • http://www.stevecurtin.com steve curtin

    Chris,
    Great points. You obviously speak from experience. Appreciate your humility as well (i.e., my audience doesn’t seem to like it as much). Been there.
    I would add that there’s an attention curve when you have the greatest % of your audience’s attention: at the beginning and end. If a presentation is going to be judged as effective, it will be due in large part to a strong opening and closing.
    Best,
    Steve

  • http://adrielhampton.wordpress.com Adriel Hampton

    Chris, this hit the spot! (Although I hate the pic – those exhibits are sick, man!) I’m planning a social media training with some friends and hope to incorporate some of these fresh thoughts, or at least let them influence my own thinking and planning. I’ve done a lot of public speaking, so it’s easy to wing it. Reading this made me think how much I’m ripping off the audience by not putting my best into a presentation.
    I also really appreciate your humility in admitting that you are learning as you are thinking.

  • http://adrielhampton.wordpress.com Adriel Hampton

    Chris, this hit the spot! (Although I hate the pic – those exhibits are sick, man!) I’m planning a social media training with some friends and hope to incorporate some of these fresh thoughts, or at least let them influence my own thinking and planning. I’ve done a lot of public speaking, so it’s easy to wing it. Reading this made me think how much I’m ripping off the audience by not putting my best into a presentation.
    I also really appreciate your humility in admitting that you are learning as you are thinking.

  • http://adrielhampton.wordpress.com Adriel Hampton

    Chris, this hit the spot! (Although I hate the pic – those exhibits are sick, man!) I’m planning a social media training with some friends and hope to incorporate some of these fresh thoughts, or at least let them influence my own thinking and planning. I’ve done a lot of public speaking, so it’s easy to wing it. Reading this made me think how much I’m ripping off the audience by not putting my best into a presentation.
    I also really appreciate your humility in admitting that you are learning as you are thinking.

  • http://www.localhouseblog.com Jonathan Fleming

    I love your sense of being a simple normal cool down to earth guy, I think it helps people to learn by seeing that you make mistakes; you show a big time willingness to keep learning; and you have a very passionate way of bringing people into being interested. Presentations get more masterful when we relax, make mistakes and focus on helping people. People respect genuine humility in speeches! Helping people to learn is key, keep experimenting Mr. Brogan, great work….

  • http://www.localhouseblog.com Jonathan Fleming

    I love your sense of being a simple normal cool down to earth guy, I think it helps people to learn by seeing that you make mistakes; you show a big time willingness to keep learning; and you have a very passionate way of bringing people into being interested. Presentations get more masterful when we relax, make mistakes and focus on helping people. People respect genuine humility in speeches! Helping people to learn is key, keep experimenting Mr. Brogan, great work….

  • http://www.localhouseblog.com Jonathan Fleming

    I love your sense of being a simple normal cool down to earth guy, I think it helps people to learn by seeing that you make mistakes; you show a big time willingness to keep learning; and you have a very passionate way of bringing people into being interested. Presentations get more masterful when we relax, make mistakes and focus on helping people. People respect genuine humility in speeches! Helping people to learn is key, keep experimenting Mr. Brogan, great work….

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  • http://blog.andrewweir.co.uk/ Andy Weir

    Hey Chris,

    Really great post – as others have said.

    I especially appreciated your humility in acknowledging where your audience were not digging your improv.

    The value of putting other people first can never be underestimated (unless you subscribe to the 48 laws of power!).

    Thanks again,

    Peace, W

  • http://blog.andrewweir.co.uk/ Andy Weir

    Hey Chris,

    Really great post – as others have said.

    I especially appreciated your humility in acknowledging where your audience were not digging your improv.

    The value of putting other people first can never be underestimated (unless you subscribe to the 48 laws of power!).

    Thanks again,

    Peace, W

  • http://blog.andrewweir.co.uk theWeir

    Hey Chris,

    Really great post – as others have said.

    I especially appreciated your humility in acknowledging where your audience were not digging your improv.

    The value of putting other people first can never be underestimated (unless you subscribe to the 48 laws of power!).

    Thanks again,

    Peace, W

  • http://www.repumetrix.com/blog Joseph Fiore

    Chris,

    Insightful post – thanks for sharing!

    I can see how I’ve applied many of the tips you describe, however with 90% of our presentations being done via Web conference, what kind of barometer can you use to measure effectiveness, and/or what tips do you have to help read a room of people you can’t really see?

    While mine is a unique example to introduce into this discussion, I do see Web conferencing becoming more widely used/accepted mainly because cutting down air travel is good for the environment and makes for good fiscal policy for businesses operating in a tough economy.

    I’d appreciate any insights you may have on the subject.

    Thanks Chris!

    Joseph

  • http://www.repumetrix.com/blog Joseph Fiore

    Chris,

    Insightful post – thanks for sharing!

    I can see how I’ve applied many of the tips you describe, however with 90% of our presentations being done via Web conference, what kind of barometer can you use to measure effectiveness, and/or what tips do you have to help read a room of people you can’t really see?

    While mine is a unique example to introduce into this discussion, I do see Web conferencing becoming more widely used/accepted mainly because cutting down air travel is good for the environment and makes for good fiscal policy for businesses operating in a tough economy.

    I’d appreciate any insights you may have on the subject.

    Thanks Chris!

    Joseph

  • http://www.repumetrix.com/blog Joseph Fiore

    Chris,

    Insightful post – thanks for sharing!

    I can see how I’ve applied many of the tips you describe, however with 90% of our presentations being done via Web conference, what kind of barometer can you use to measure effectiveness, and/or what tips do you have to help read a room of people you can’t really see?

    While mine is a unique example to introduce into this discussion, I do see Web conferencing becoming more widely used/accepted mainly because cutting down air travel is good for the environment and makes for good fiscal policy for businesses operating in a tough economy.

    I’d appreciate any insights you may have on the subject.

    Thanks Chris!

    Joseph

  • http://www.inboundinternetmarketingblog.com John Flynn

    I have to disagree on the Baldwin speech in Glenngarry. I is a “bully” speech that we sales people hear all the time. It just puts fear into people. As opposed to a speech that helps people find their own “system” of selling and building on that.

    Is it dramtic…yes. Effective….no.

  • http://www.inboundinternetmarketingblog.com John Flynn

    I have to disagree on the Baldwin speech in Glenngarry. I is a “bully” speech that we sales people hear all the time. It just puts fear into people. As opposed to a speech that helps people find their own “system” of selling and building on that.

    Is it dramtic…yes. Effective….no.

  • http://www.inboundinternetmarketingblog.com John Flynn

    I have to disagree on the Baldwin speech in Glenngarry. I is a “bully” speech that we sales people hear all the time. It just puts fear into people. As opposed to a speech that helps people find their own “system” of selling and building on that.

    Is it dramtic…yes. Effective….no.

  • http://www.vbpoutsourcing.com KJ Rodgers

    I work the same way as you mentioned with basic notes and improv from them. I get tripped up too easy if I script my speech into memorization. I learned this when I was a Taoastmaster

  • http://www.vbpoutsourcing.com KJ Rodgers

    I work the same way as you mentioned with basic notes and improv from them. I get tripped up too easy if I script my speech into memorization. I learned this when I was a Taoastmaster

  • http://www.vbpoutsourcing.com KJ Rodgers

    I work the same way as you mentioned with basic notes and improv from them. I get tripped up too easy if I script my speech into memorization. I learned this when I was a Taoastmaster

  • http://www.vbpoutsourcing.com KJ Rodgers

    I practice the same presentation style, from notes and improv. I get tripped on memorization or scripted speeches. I learned this from Toastmasters

  • http://www.vbpoutsourcing.com KJ Rodgers

    I practice the same presentation style, from notes and improv. I get tripped on memorization or scripted speeches. I learned this from Toastmasters

  • http://www.vbpoutsourcing.com KJ Rodgers

    I practice the same presentation style, from notes and improv. I get tripped on memorization or scripted speeches. I learned this from Toastmasters

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  • http://beckmanp.wordpress.com/ Beckman Perry

    I love the idea of treating a speech like a production. I did ballet for many years of my life and feel that giving a speech is strikingly similar to a performance. In dance you need to connect ideas through movement, whereas in when making a speech you need to connect your ideas and thoughts with words. In both situations, the thoughts need to run together smoothly and the performer needs to be able to create a constant balance between clarification and excitement. This was a great post that gave me many insightful tips to use when I make my next presentation. Thanks!

  • http://beckmanp.wordpress.com/ Beckman Perry

    I love the idea of treating a speech like a production. I did ballet for many years of my life and feel that giving a speech is strikingly similar to a performance. In dance you need to connect ideas through movement, whereas in when making a speech you need to connect your ideas and thoughts with words. In both situations, the thoughts need to run together smoothly and the performer needs to be able to create a constant balance between clarification and excitement. This was a great post that gave me many insightful tips to use when I make my next presentation. Thanks!

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  • Priscilla Wyeth

    With all due respect, Toastmasters, founded in 1924, is where public speaking training and support starts and comes around to. Plain and simple, it’s the best way to improve your speaking, your confidence and your leadership skills. You practise with fellow members who become friends and supporters and who provide constructive feedback to help you grow.

    I’m in business for myself and have been involved with my TM club for 4 years now. We have over 30 members, most of them business people, and all of them will tell you that joining Toastmasters has been the best decision they’ve made to help grow their business. Find the Toastmasters club nearest you by going to the TMInternational website, http://www.toastmasters.org/find/.

    Priscilla Wyeth, ACB, ALB
    President, Hudson Rise ‘n Shine Toastmasters

  • Priscilla Wyeth

    With all due respect, Toastmasters, founded in 1924, is where public speaking training and support starts and comes around to. Plain and simple, it’s the best way to improve your speaking, your confidence and your leadership skills. You practise with fellow members who become friends and supporters and who provide constructive feedback to help you grow.

    I’m in business for myself and have been involved with my TM club for 4 years now. We have over 30 members, most of them business people, and all of them will tell you that joining Toastmasters has been the best decision they’ve made to help grow their business. Find the Toastmasters club nearest you by going to the TMInternational website, http://www.toastmasters.org/find/.

    Priscilla Wyeth, ACB, ALB
    President, Hudson Rise ‘n Shine Toastmasters

  • Priscilla Wyeth

    With all due respect, Toastmasters, founded in 1924, is where public speaking training and support starts and comes around to. Plain and simple, it’s the best way to improve your speaking, your confidence and your leadership skills. You practise with fellow members who become friends and supporters and who provide constructive feedback to help you grow.

    I’m in business for myself and have been involved with my TM club for 4 years now. We have over 30 members, most of them business people, and all of them will tell you that joining Toastmasters has been the best decision they’ve made to help grow their business. Find the Toastmasters club nearest you by going to the TMInternational website, http://www.toastmasters.org/find/.

    Priscilla Wyeth, ACB, ALB
    President, Hudson Rise ‘n Shine Toastmasters

  • http://www.theappleofmyi.com/blog Jon Moss

    Some great ideas and comments Chris.

    May I point you all over to Andy Bounds>>http://www.andybounds.com/
    He has some superb free info, and has written an excellent book called the Jelly Effect.

    I’ve been fortunate enough to meet Andy a couple of times, business and social, and he always impresses and helps me.

  • http://www.theappleofmyi.com/blog Jon Moss

    Some great ideas and comments Chris.

    May I point you all over to Andy Bounds>>http://www.andybounds.com/
    He has some superb free info, and has written an excellent book called the Jelly Effect.

    I’ve been fortunate enough to meet Andy a couple of times, business and social, and he always impresses and helps me.

  • http://www.theappleofmyi.com/blog Jon Moss

    Some great ideas and comments Chris.

    May I point you all over to Andy Bounds>>http://www.andybounds.com/
    He has some superb free info, and has written an excellent book called the Jelly Effect.

    I’ve been fortunate enough to meet Andy a couple of times, business and social, and he always impresses and helps me.

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  • http://www.socialmedia-academy.com Axel Schultze

    Really good one – thanks for posting it
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